Haiii.... My
Name is Moh.Nursecha, I want to tell my holidey with beloved frinds after celebrating Eid for 2 days.
Starting to wake up at 05:00 I so happy because I was going on vacation with best friends to the tourist
attractions at the foot of the Mountain Slamet Pemalang - Central Java, I
was preparing of
provisions at 08:00 I was going to home deni as a basecamp, and I arrived at 09:00. there already
assembled Pujo, Frankly, Yulia, Edi, Deni, Ibnu, and Jecko.
We began praying and we were going Pemalang at 10:00, and we arrived pemalang at 14:00. We were going by a motorbike, while on the way we were enjoying the beautiful scenery of the village. there we greeted very beautiful scenery and air fresh of mountains. After lunch at the lodge we headed straight for the tea garden to enjoy the view
tea gardens

frinds with Nature
By nightfall we were spending to have fun
with friends, singing songs reagge until late at night. Morning at 06:00 after breakfast we began preparing to going rafting basecamp, 08:00 we reached the rainbow rafting on the banks of the
Comal River Pemalang. And this is where the highlight of our vacation that
rainbow rafting. Rafting and
white water rafting are recreational outdoor activities which use an inflatable
raft to navigate a river or other body of water. This is often done on
whitewater or different degrees of rough water, and generally represents a new
and challenging environment for participants. Adrenaline with down the Comal River as far as
12 KM with rugged terrain and swift river currents, we finised rafting
at 17:00.
We finished rafting rest until morning came, and we were going home at 8
am. Holiday fun with beloved companions after long time no see because we had a
busy each.
Hehe....
that is my holiday storys with beloved friends.

Thanks for sharing your experience in your holiday.
BalasHapusAfter I read your story, I'd like you fix your words or sentences such as:
"I want to tell my holidey with beloved frinds after celebrating Eid for 2 days."
"I want to tell you about my holiday along with my beloved friends.
This vacation started at 2 days after celebrating Eid."
One more thing, Its not "Tea Garden" but "Tea Field".
hehe.... thanks for your sugest.
BalasHapusI will fix it
Nice holiday, Moh Nursecha:) but, I think you need to fix your words wrong because there are some words wrong:)
BalasHapusyeah.... I know, my article is not very good yet.... thanks gitaaaaa
BalasHapusWaw this is beautiful view and i think your activities are fun right??
BalasHapus"I want to tell my holidey"
i think that's typo word right? hahaha
it looks like an exciting adventure😍😍😍 but you have to correct the words that are supposed to use the past tense.
BalasHapusThanks you Michael and Della....
BalasHapusplease halp me to correct my contents.
I really enjoyed my vacation full of adventure and adrenaline.
BalasHapus